Dormant Brain Syndrome

This morning after a nice lay-in a good breakfast and a saunter around the backyard, I am still searching for a glimmer of inspiration.This was always going to be a busy week and then I have thrown NaNoWriMo into the mix as well so I had better burn a bit of midnight oil over the month to complete this challenge.

Good luck to all those who are on track and may inspiration and perspiration combine to carry the rest of us for the next few weeks.

A slow few days of NaNoWriMo

I thought I would offer a report and an excuse for no new chapter posts on Toby Farrier.

I have had a few commitments to other projects since Friday and haven't had a lot of time to open the computer. Hope to have more done by tomorrow night and have set myself a 25,000 word count by this time next week.

I know the rules say don't worry about the editing and just to type away; but I have had a quick look at the draft for the first time this morning and can see that it really needs another hard drafting session.

Thanks for dropping by.

NANAWRIMO day 2

Today is a bit hard after a big effort yesterday housework gardening and other obligations are in the way. Have to hit the keys hard tonight and find another 2500 words to finish chapter four.

NaNoWriMo has started

Well the kick off was over seven hours ago and I am yet to write a word.

The plan for this wet Melbourne Thursday will be to try and get the first three chapters down. I'm hoping for between 5,000 -6,000 words over the next nine hours. If I have planned it properly and ignore the character's demands for bigger parts I may get there.

I will post the Chapters one at a time on the Toby Farrier page of this blog.

Good luck to all participants.

Toby Farrier: Character Profile

To create my new novel TOBY FARRIER I need to construct the details of each character.

I have adapted a sheet developed by Merlene Fawdrey, converting the information into a table that I can use to build character profiles for the protagonists of each story.

I find a written character profile to be absolutely necessary, it helps me maintain consistency through the story. When I was writing KUNDELA for some reason I changed the names of the two characters part way through and it took ages to fix. I also read on Fleur McDonald's website that she uses photos as prompts as well and so later today I may be seen carousing the newsagent's shelves for teen magazines.

For the next week only, here is a look at what makes Toby, Toby.

 

NAME:                                               :  Toby Farrier

Position in story:                                 :  Main Character

Age:	15 yrs
Nationality:	Australian
Socioeconomic level as a child:	Lower Middle Class
Socioeconomic level as an adult:	N/A
Hometown:	Stanhope Victoria
Current residence:	Lives with Arthur in Brunswick
Occupation:	Year 10 Student
Income:	N/A
Talents/skills:	Bright Student, Inquisitive, loves writing and loyal
Salary:	Pocket Money from home only
Relationships:
Birth order:	First
Siblings (describe relationship):	Eldest child who disrupts his other 2 siblings
Spouse/partner (describe relationship):
Children (describe relationship):
Parents (describe relationship):	Father: Darren        Mother: Tracy  have a hard time with Toby’s disruptive behaviour.
Grandparents (describe relationship):	Arthur Farrier takes him in and gives him a new focus.
Grandchildren (describe relationship):
Significant others (describe relationship):
Relationship skills:	Good communicator, has made new friends since moving to the city.
Physical Characteristics
Height:	160 cm
Weight:	55 kg
Race:	Australian
Eye Colour:	Brown
Hair Colour:	Black spiky styled hair with blonde tips
Glasses or contact lenses?	Gold rimmed round lenses
Skin colour:	Light olive
Shape of face:	Square good looking pinned earlobes
Distinguishing features:	Jagged scar on left cheek from a broken bottle in a school yard fight
How does he/she dress?	Likes skinny leg jeans, white muscle Tee shirts and sand shoes.
Mannerisms:	Once fidgety and on edge he has calmed under Arthur’s tutelage
Habits: (smoking, drinking/drugs/addictions etc.)	Loves Allen’s Snakes and enjoys a roast lunch with Arthur on Sundays
Any physical illnesses?	None
Health:	Fine never sick
Hobbies:	Played a bit of Aussie rules to please his dad but would sooner read and write stories.
Favourite sayings:	Come on Toby focus, we can do this. Maate!
Speech patterns:	Normal well spoken Aussie English
Disabilities:	None
Style (Elegant, shabby etc.):	Trendy Target
Greatest flaw:	Quick to anger but now under control
Best quality:	Loyal and Honest
Personality Attributes and Attitudes
Educational Background:	Still at school
Intelligence Level:	Top 10 student in every class at high school
Any Mental Illnesses?	Parents thought he had ADHD but a change of glasses by Arthur’s optometrist turns his attitudes
Learning Experiences:	Watches listens learns ad takes lots of notes
Character's short-term goals in life:	Get through school
Character's long-term goals in life:	Famous novelist
How does Character see himself/herself?	Confident and able no challenge too big.
How does Character believe he /she is perceived by others?	Super cool by a few friends but despised by the thug element in his school because of his quick whit
How self-confident is the character?	He doesn’t believe his own publicity grounded and knows his limitations. Works to his strengths
Does the character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof?	Logic
What would most embarrass this character	Being reminded of his early ADHD (he keeps this link very close to his chest)
Spiritual Characteristics
Does the character believe in God?	He hasn’t been influenced or exposed to any formal religion but wonders about an afterlife
What are the character's spiritual beliefs?
Is religion or spirituality a part of this character's life?
If so, what role does it play?

 

Novel Writing Report

Pitching our stories was the main focus for the workshop this week. The idea behind the exercise was to prepare those of us seeking a publisher to be aware of the pitfalls and difficulties when promoting your work.

I decided to go with a novel that will be written as part of the NaNoWriMo 50,000 word challenge in November. I thought I was prepared, One page handout, done. Synopsis, done. Chapter outlines, done. Character sheets, done. Once I had given my spiel, Toby Farrier and the secret of the gold fountain pen would be a winner.

I was ready or so I thought. I should have practised the pitch instead of trying to wing it. Normally I have little problem when presenting a product but this was different, even though I knew the story well felt at home with the characters and was among friends, I choked. I knew it as soon as I opened my mouth and the words died on my tongue.

The lesson was not lost. I watched as each of my colleagues presented their work and why they should be accepted for publication. I learnt something from everyone and I have to commend Merlene Fawdrey for including this in her series of workshops, this one exercise has taught us much.

A big shout to author Chris Mack who absolutely smashed the presentation with her pitch. Not only did she know her work,but she came across confident and engaging. Hell we all had our hands in our pocket to buy her book, and yes she was that good. Check out Chris's blog by clicking on the link below.

To do this again I will do the following:

• Dress for the part.  (clothes maketh the man and the presentation)
• Practise the pitch beforehand.
• Leave handouts until after the pitch.
• Sell the story 80% the Author 20% (if the story doesn't capture the interest, the author talking about themselves  will be boring anyway)
• Take nothing for granted.

I will put up my pitch over the weekend and ask for comments on Toby Farrier.


Chris Mack's Blog: http://chrismackauthor.wordpress.com/

 

Merlene Fawdrey : http://merlenefawdry.blogspot.com.au/

Julee Stillman:       http://juleestillman.blogspot.com.au/

Lorraine Jones Wins Brimbank Writing Comtionpeti

Congratulations to Lorraine Jones a fellow member of Wordsmiths of Melton in winning this award. Some of us just bash the down words onto paper while Lorraine manages to craft a well structured story and craft it into a piece of prize-winning art.

Read more of Lorraine's pathway to literary success by clicking on this link to the article in the Star Newspaper.

Star Newspaper Article: http://www.starnewsgroup.com.au/star/sunshne-ardeer-albion/370/story/155120.html