With Toby Farrier I wrote a short story I called The Character Bus and used it as a plan to work out who the people were and how they interacted. It was a great tool but I still had to do charts for each one of the characters to create an easy reference to follow.
Les Gillespie's Gold follows on from Kundela, so some of the characters are known. Now others need introducing to keep the tension in the story and for over a week that is all I have done. Names may change to more suit the story later but by doing it this way a decision is made when the character is created. this has a two fold benefit to prevent duplication of Christian names and it also addresses the problem of ensuring the name is correct for their generation and position in time.
Thanks go to Merlene Fawdrey for providing the draft character charts through her Novel Writing Workshop sessions.
Here is one of my favourite characters who appeared in KUNDELA but takes a bigger role in Les Gillespie.
NAME: : Fiona O'Rourke
Position in story Secondary - Tilly’s Friend
Age:
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37
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Nationality:
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Australian
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Socioeconomic
level as a child:
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Good
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Socioeconomic
level as an adult:
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Good
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Hometown:
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Sellicks Beach
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Current
residence:
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Orroroo Police House
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Occupation:
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Home Duties
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Income:
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Family Benefits +
husbands wage
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Talents/skills:
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Was a school teacher
before marriage
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Salary:
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Gets some part time
teaching work at Orroroo & Jamestown will go back to work
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Relationships:
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Birth
order:
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Second of two
children
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Siblings
(describe relationship):
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Stuart----43
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Spouse/partner
(describe relationship):
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John Police Constable in Orroroo for over 3
years)
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Children
(describe relationship):
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Four: Ashleigh, Zac,
Harry, Maxine, (Max)
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Parents
(describe relationship):
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Sam and Joan Styles
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Grandparents
(describe relationship):
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N/A
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Grandchildren
(describe relationship):
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N/A
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Significant
others (describe relationship):
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John (Husband)
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Relationship
skills:
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Good
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Physical Characteristics
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Height:
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160
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Weight:
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62 kg
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Race:
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Aussie
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Eye
Colour:
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Green
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Hair
Colour:
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Changes, most of the
time she is blonde
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Glasses
or contact lenses?
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Neither
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Skin
colour:
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Fair
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Shape of
face:
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Narrow
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Distinguishing
features:
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Broad nose
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How does
he/she dress?
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Simple smart
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Mannerisms:
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N/A
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Habits:
(smoking, drinking/drugs/addictions etc.)
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Non smoker social
drinker (has an image to protect)
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Any
physical illnesses?
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None
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Health:
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Good
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Hobbies:
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Netball and gym
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Favourite
sayings:
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I was like that once
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Speech
patterns:
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N/A
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Disabilities:
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None
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Style
(Elegant, shabby etc.):
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Yummy Mummy
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Greatest
flaw:
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Says yes to everyone
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Best
quality:
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congeniality
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Personality Attributes and
Attitudes
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Educational
Background:
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Teachers College in
Adelaide
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Intelligence
Level:
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High
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Any
Mental Illnesses?
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None
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Learning
Experiences:
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Life in country towns
has rounded her life skills
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Character's
short-term goals in life:
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Get back to work to
contribute to the family’s security
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Character's
long-term goals in life:
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Be happy with lots of
grandchildren
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How does
Character see himself/herself?
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Confident strong
supportive
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How does
Character believe he/she is perceived by others?
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As above
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How
self-confident is the character?
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She is happy with who
she is
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Does the
character seem ruled by emotion or logic or some combination thereof?
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Emotion features
heavily in her judgement but measures it with logic
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What
would most embarrass this character
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Family scandal
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Spiritual Characteristics
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Does the
character believe in God?
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Unsure
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What are
the character's spiritual beliefs?
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She takes her
children to Sunday School
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Is
religion or spirituality a part of this character's life?
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Not really but she
likes rules and the Christian religion provides that
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If so,
what role does it play?
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As you can see Merlene's chart has helped reference this person's features characteristics and beliefs. giving me a ready reference to what I might need to know as the book develops.
Thanks Merlene.
Wow! Great profile, Terry.
ReplyDeleteI tried to listen enough to learn something. A profile of this depth takes a fair bit of thinking about and even now have realised that Fiona is married to John O'Rourke so I will change her name before I need to use it again.
ReplyDeleteAs this is the second book in a minimum of three in the series, a profile containing this much information will be invaluable in the books to come.
Thanks for dropping by.
The answer to the comp is Laslett
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