Terry L Probert is a novelist and shortstory writer. His debut novel KUNDELA earned a commendation in the 2013 FAW Christina Stead Award.
Currently looking for an agent/publisher to bring any of his novels to print, Terry is a member of the Fellowship of Australian Writers, Writers Victoria and SA Writers. Terry is active in his local literary community. His Short Story Banib the Bunyip placed second in the City of Melton Short Story Competition 2013.
This story has been reviewed by my coleagues and I have included some of their suggestions in my last draft. I hope to put it and more of these stories into a small book due for release with Kundela.
This is a great children's story. I don;t think you need to do too much to it except knock off some of the commas.
ReplyDeleteI can see you are a man of many literary talents:-)
Awww Shucks
ReplyDeleteI have just had a reveiw of this story by Kyamah and Montana, they are the ones who wanted me to write them a horror story.
ReplyDeleteAnd who when asked did you like it.
Replied 'It was ok, yeah we liked it.'
So Job done I guess.
Ok I have had another attempt at polishing it up a bit. I think it reads better.
ReplyDeleteI have made some changes to the text, and as a result of getting it ready to publish, have removed the story.
ReplyDeleteCheck the others out before I get to them too.