I presented this piece to the group today, who received it with mixed reaction. I wasn't as literal in my descriptions or conflict and aspirations, of Ciny, Faith and Ben, as the group expected, but I wanted to convey the characters in a more abstract way. I'm interested in everyone's comments. You can find the criteria in the previous post. I hope you enjoy my take on a popular exercise.
Bang
I knew my target’s
habits and knew what time he would arrive. The Awards Presentation would be
crowded but the lines of people lining the red carpet would work to my
advantage.
Television crews were
set up everywhere and it was easy to blend in, my only concern was the
occupants of room 515. From the fifth floor I would have a clean shot, it was only
four hundred metres, the carpet would provide excellent background and alignment.
I learned Faith and Cindy McLeod lived in 515 from the names on the apartment mail boxes. I arranged tickets to
the Oscars for them on the ruse that they won them in a competition. Their apartment would be vacant by noon and I did not expect them to arrive before midnight. Once
inside, all I had to do was wait.
I dressed as a staff janitor,
I stowed my rifle in a cleaning trolley and made it to the fifth floor. Just before noon the girls left via the lifts at the end of the hall. I used a
stolen house pass to gain access.
I took a towel from
the trolley and laid it on the table, where I put the unassembled rifle. I pulled
a cleaner through the barrel, looked down the bore and started assembly. I
knew I only need one shot, but filled the five shot magazine and put another cartridge in the chamber to be sure.
I moved furniture
to make sure I was comfortable and cracked a front window open. There was
nothing between my position and the target.
I shut the window and
waited, at 2.30 the phone rang, I ignored it. By 3-30, I heard people in the
hall, but they walked on. I kept the television muted and watched reporters
accosting celebrities making their way along the carpet.
At 5.00 pm I opened
the window again and took up my position. Flags hung listless from their
poles, no wind, that would help. I lined up a couple of guests who were about
the same height as my target, Ben.
A stretch Hummer
arrived, at 5.10 the target and his escort stepped out. I cursed under my
breath, the limo blocked my view. I cocked the rifle, slid the safety off and waited.
The Hummer glided away. He was clear, I squeezed the
trigger and watched the bullet take its mark.
My end of the
contract was complete. I closed the window, packed up the rifle, put the
furniture back and sauntered out.